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Statement Coherence Review

Focused reading of personal statements, motivation letters, and research summaries for internal logic, tone fit, and alignment with stated criteria.

From ¥18,000 per statement · 3–4 business days

Hand writing notes beside printed pages on a desk

Who it is for

Applicants who already have a complete packet but want a sharper reading of the narrative documents

What you leave with

Annotated statement plus a short coherence brief covering argument flow, unsupported claims, and criterion mismatches

Included

  • Two rounds of written annotation on one statement (up to 1,200 words)
  • Criterion map against the programme or funder’s published language
  • Tone and register notes for the intended reader

Not included

  • Full dossier audit of accompanying forms
  • Ghostwriting or wholesale rewrite
  • Referee letter drafting